Still going with the story of Fred Johnson, Paragon of Virtue. Here are links to the previous episodes. If you need/want to catch up, click here for the 1st installment, 2nd installment, 3rd installment, 4th installment, 5th installment, 6th installment, 7th installment., 8th installment, 9th installment, 10th installment, 11th installment, 12th installment... Sorry I never finished last week. Rough week and I forgot the last one. Will post my first two paragraphs, as it's almost 8:00 pm and add the last shortly. These words REALLY don't lend themselves the Fred Johnson story. I work so hard at not cheating that I tend to eliminate words that I think might automatically plug into Fred's story, but I think perhaps I am over doing it. That is the downside of continuing stories when you are also the word and phrase maker... the war between the impulse to cheat and one's better angels.
Word for this week's 10-word challenge were: practice, essential, pen, victim, allegory, straw, bear, go west young man, fingertips, hunch And for the mini: keen, swan, organ, champ, brush
My mega:
My mini:
It didn't take a keen eye to see that Count Psycho was in a foul mood. If they had been in a movie, it would be a horror film, he mused and there would be spooky organ music playing and building to a climax. In an effort to distract the Count from his brooding and to brush away his own anxiety, Fred asked, "So how does shadow boxing work? Do your people call you Champ? They would where I come from." It turned out that Shadow Boxing in the Kingdom of Sunday was significantly different that what the term meant on Earth. Her in Sunday, one did battle with shadow selves, beings identical in physical form but representing aspect of the self one needed to tame or strengthen. Doing battle with one's inner demons (or perhaps inner Angels in the Count's case) seemed an intriguing idea to Fred. He wondered if he would get a chance to give it a try and then wondered whether it would be wise to let his enemy - for want of a better word - obtain knowledge of his inner weaknesses... and with that thought he perhaps he understood Psycho's reluctance to share this particular experience with one sent to bring his better self - if possible - into the light. Was it possible, he wondered, that Psycho had an inner swan seeking birth into the real world? A new excitement woke in the Paragon's heart and he began to look forward to their visit to the Shadow Boxing Room.
My 10-word:
As they entered the Hall of Shadow Boxing, the healer's words, "Go west young man," flashed through his mind as though there was perhaps a secret message contained in them. Fred decided to bear them in mind as they progressed into the huge hall. He was surprised to see that the room was divided into huge pens, floors covered with straw and the walls hung with huge mirrors. He wished he could have a chance to practice in private (he dreaded Psycho seeing how weak he perceived himself to be) so as to avoid completely shaming himself in this allegorical battle with whatever essential part of himself stepped forward to do battle. Sensing that his beloved human was about to fall victim to his penchant for self doubt, Fred's loyal and wise dog Cane - who had managed to keep such a low profile that Fred had completely forgotten his presence - gently kissed the Paragon's fingertips. Gratefully pulled back from the brink, Fred hunched down with a both a hug and a treat for his 4-legged friend and whispered, "Cane, you are the best shadow self a man could ask for. You must be the wisest, kindest dog in the known Universe. I quite wish you could talk. What do you think "go west young man means?" And as though he understood the question perfectly, Cane bounded off to the far left corner of the huge room, followed by an astonished Paragon who thought the Kingdom of Sunday and it's inhabitants would never cease to amaze him astonish him.
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Words for next week's 10-word challenge: pelican, patch, pendulum, poodle, puddle, paddle, parched, Pegasus, petunia, pig
And for the mini: flaw, filling, filter, flattery, fashionable
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1 comment:
I think you did a great job with the words this week - I didn't feel like the story was contrived at all :)
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