Oops... I forgot all about Wordzzles today, so I'm posting very late. My apologies. It's late, so I will yet again be putting off doing my exercises until tomorrow. Sorry again.
6:10 Saturday: Finally finished. Had a hard time doing these. I like the last one, just because I like my play on words. The other two are pretty lame. Now I can go read CJ's offering. Yippee! I'm not the only one this week!
Words for this week's 10-word challenge: gratitude, immediate, vivid, choice, fragments, carving, charity, solitude, lagging, where did I put my glasses And for the mini: irresponsible, teddy bear, colorful, knife and fork, wheels
My mega:
And my mini:
"How could you be so Irresponsible! I want an explanation and I want it now! I can't believe you did that! Put down your knife and fork and answer me now, young man!" Fred "Wheels" McCarthy could hardly believe the fuss she was making. Looking at the filthy, mutilated pile of his younger sister's once colorful teddy bears, he replied. "We needed targets, Mom and Annie said we could borrow them." "Annie is three and you know full well that she didn't know you were going to destroy them.," she said shaking her head in aggravation. "Well, you will pay for them. No computer for a week and you will work until I decide you have done enough to pay for replacing them." "But, Mom," Fred started to offer his best whine.... then, looking at her face thought better of it. "OK," he said, instead. "Good decision," his mother said, "Now, finish your dinner and when you are done you can clear the table and help me wash the dishes... for starters." Life, Fred, thought to himself, is so unfair.
And the 10-word:
"Where did I put my glasses?" Choice Martin, asked his wife, whose immediate response was - incorrectly in this instance - probably on top of your head." Despite her penchant for gentle mockery, Choice felt nothing but gratitude for Jenny, his beloved companion of 30 years. She had rescued him - he still felt a kind of awe-struck wonder at the fact that she loved him - from a life of wounded solitude. His had not been a happy childhood. His mother - a fanatical anti-abortion activist (hence the name Choice) had made it clear that she had given birth to him as kind of a noble act of charity because it was, she was fond of telling him, "the right thing to do." He had vivid fragments of memory of being forced to stand outside clinics at the age of 2 or 3, carrying a sign that said (he learned later) "Make the right choice." Annoyed by his lack of toddler gratitude and enthusiasm, she would scold him for lagging and lolly-gagging, explaining how less morally right mothers - usually, she would point to some young woman entering a clinic - might have ended his life before it began. By the time he was a teen, he found himself rather wishing that she had spared him and when he reached his 20s and moved out on his own, he began working for a pro-choice (ah, the irony) organization in the community where he first met his beloved Jenny, whose perceptive heart saw beneath his surface and began gently, patiently, carving through the layers of hurt and shame and self protection to help him realize that he was not a burden to be endured, but a treasure to be mined. She had taught him the difference between love and duty and he had felt not only loved, but liked, for the first time in his life. His mother had never spoken to him again. "Your choice," he had replied in their last conversation, wondering if she understood the irony.
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Words for next week's 10-word challenge: funding, week, truck, paper, salt, that's why we're here, globe, lemonade, tight, vigor
And for the mini: extreme makeover, perfect sense, good news, cheater, share
Thanks you for playing. Newcomers can check here for some guidelines to make the game more fun. There are no rules, just some general guidelines and tricks.
3 comments:
I think I got it "write" this time. I posted my story, with the correct words, I think. I'll be back to read your stories.
Hi Raven,
Loved all three of your stories this week. Great use of all the words and all very different.
When more people were participating, it always amazed me how every story went in a unique direction, because as soon as I saw the words, an idea would pop into my head ---and I was always sure someone else would go with a similar story line.
I had a week off of class last week, but have one this week with a rough draft due. Next week my paper is due and we will have a test, too, so I probably will not be participating this coming week,
Good use of the words this week - & I think the last one is my favorite too :)
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