Sunday, June 29, 2008

One Single Impression: Doorways


This week's prompt for One Single Impression was "doorway." I'm not feeling well and I did these too quickly and impatiently. If I had better sense, I'd just wait and post them another day but I have my rules and I do OSI on Sunday so for better or worse, these are sort of badly framed and I don't like the colors and I think I had another one in my head that I have misplaced. If I remember it, I may add it later. So...

Doorway to dark side
OSI is now posted
Even though it sucks






39 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Well, Raven, I respectfully disagree. I think these are very, very good.

The agoraphobia poem is startling and wonderful.

And the doorway to another heart is very beautiful.

I hope you feel better.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

I read nothing sucking here. I hope the next door you open leads to an uplifting experience...

Pam said...

I noticed that the doorway you chose to pair with the agoraphobic poem is the one with the outside vibrantly shining through. Maybe you answered your question?

me ann my camera said...

I like them all but I can really relate to the "doorway for my eyes".
Very nice.

the teach said...

Katherine, the haiku are magnificent! Putting your feelings on the page is so important so we can feel with you! :)

texasblu said...

I've done that too - written stuff I thought sucked and then people liked it. Sometimes I won't even post it on the prompt page because I figure it's that bad - I think we creative types are just too hard on ourselves.

I really liked your work - my favorite being the agoraphobic - took my breath away....

Roswila said...

These are much better than your assessment of them. :-) (We are our own worst critics, methinks.)

I particularly like the agoraphobic one.

Greyscale Territory said...

I believe you have posted doorways that may be pivotal in your life's journeys. They can never be "rough", even when you are unwell. They are always there waiting for you to utilise them in some way. That is the essence of your post! It is fantastic!

Julie said...

I agree with everyone but you! You did a wonderful post even though I'm not familiar with this project.

Feel better soon.

Dianne said...

I like what julie said! "I agree with everyone but you"!

I love them all - each one says a bit of the things I know and love about you.

Feel better. It's terribly humid and stormy here. This weather can make you feel sickly.

San said...

Thank you for opening these doors for us, Raven. And feel better...

Edward S Gault said...

Each one of I think is our own harshest critic!
You did excellent work here.
Thank You.

Carletta said...

Yep Raven, too hard on yourself. :)
I loved them all and the doorway is a favorite; but the cyberspace wonders is right on!

I sure hope you're feeling better -I'll be thinking about you.

Robert said...

I'm playing catch up here tonight. I just wanted to thank you so much for all your wonderful comments. Your encouraging words on my recent post meant a lot. Thank you so much.

zoya gautam said...

the doorways u open lead to such joys..get well soon Raven..

Tipper said...

I think you were too hard on yourself-they're all great!!

tumblewords said...

It's true - we are not good critics of our own work! These are very descriptive and thought-provoking. Good job!

gardenpath said...

Hope you are feeling better soon, Raven. All of your "doorway views" are good.

There are so many doors without a name keeping us in or out. Your stuff always makes me think, and I appreciate that.

Kathiesbirds said...

You did just fine. I like the photo and poem about the agoraphobic best. I think you get to choose whether the door keep you out or in.

Raven said...

Thank you everybody. My computer was down all last night and until about an hour ago this evening (11:00 pm). Thank heavens for my friend Nate.

Thank you all for your kind words.

Beloved Dreamer said...

raven, these are lovely. I love the one about the doorway to love. How very creative and delicate,I feel so limited after reading your work.

love-bd

teric said...

If these poems do make you happy, be assure that the rest of us love them. When you look back you will see what we all found to love :)

indicaspecies said...

May you go in and out of that beautiful doorway just as you please.

I hope you are feeling better already.

one more believer said...

raven, can i disagree??... these are all so wonderful and filled w/thought and wisdom... hoping you are feeling better... amen...

Nancy said...

Raven, I beg to differ; these are all excellent haiku. I sure hope you are feeling better.

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